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Written for a Penciljack writing challenge.

The Suiciders

Page 1

01 In a pub called "The Hanger". Billy, Carl, and Don are sitting around a table, along with Allie a brass Automaton. Amos stands over them with his arms crossed and serious disposition.

Amos THE RULES ARE CLEAR MEN, YE CAN FALL UPON THE LIQOUR ONCE THE MISSION IS DONE.

Billy AH C'MON LIEUTENANT, LIGHTEN' UP! EVEN THE BOILER IS 'AVIN ONE!

Amos IT, SHOULDN'T BE IN HERE.

02 Angle so that Allie can be seen wearing a dress and holding an empty mug.

Billy OFFICIALLY IT'S NOT! CARL TOLD 'EM ALLIE WAS 'IS DATE!

Carl WE FLY TO OUR DEATH IN THE MORNING LIEUTENANT, THE LEAST YOU CAN DO IS HAVE A DRINK WITH US!

03 Wide panel. The Billy, Carl, and Don are complaining.

Amos THANK YOU MEN, BUT I'LL PASS. LET'S GET SOME SLEEP. THAT'S AN ORDER.

Don AW MAN!

Carl LIGHTEN' UP LIEUTENANT!


Allie (sfx) K-TSSS


Page 2

Montage of of the men suiting up and taking off in their planes. The vehicles Bi-planes with the wings askew to look like x wing fighters, they have small locomotive style smoke stacks, and intake style engines instead of propellers. The Bomber, flown by Allie, has the rear half of an A10, and the front half of Thomas the Tank engine.

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01 Allie is lowered into the pilot seat of the Bomber by a crane.

Caption (Amos) IT'S A STRAIGHT FORWARD, BUT DANGEROUS MISSION. WE'RE GOING TO DROP THE ENTIRE PAYLOAD OF THIS BOMBER INTO THE LAP OF AN INCOMING ARMADA.

Allie (sfx) K-TSSS

02 Don pulls on the top half of his flight suit.

Caption (Amos) WE GO IN QUICKLY AND QUIETLY. TAKE OUT ANY OPPOSITION.

03 Billy climbs a small ladder to get to his cockpit.

Caption (Amos) KEEP THAT BOMBER ALIVE TILL IT'S CHRISTMAS MORNING.

04 Engines roar as Amos, sitting in the cockpit of his own fighter, has pulled his goggles down over his eyes.

Caption (Amos) COMMAND WOULD LIKE THEIR BIRD BACK,

Caption (Amos) BUT THE PLANE AND THE BOILER ARE EXPENDABLE IF IT COMES TO THAT.

05 The Suiciders take off, 4 fighters followed by the Bomber.


Page 3

01 The Suiciders fly in formation giving off tons of black smoke, guarding the Bomber. Amos gives instructions over the radio.

Amos ONE MILE TO OUR TARGET. KEEP IT TIGHT SUICIDERS!

SFX CHUG CHUG CHUG CHUG

02 Inside the Bomber cockpit with Allie, he is looking at a circular read out similar to a radar display but it's all analog.

Allie K-TSSS

Allie LIEUTENANT!

Allie I HAVE TARGETS IN SIGHT BUT...

Amos SPIT IT OUT BOILER!

03 Wide panel. The Suiciders are approaching a huge diamond shaped airship. Dozens of fighters are swarming it, and many are already turning towards them.

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Allie (over radio) K-TSSS.

Allie (over radio) THERE ARE THRICE AS MANY AS INTELLIGENCE TOLD US!


04 Draw the classic cockpit angle with planes coming head on and firing.

Amos BY THE JOURNEYMAN! PULL UP! PULL UP!

SFX (machine gun) BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA BUDDA!

05 The Suiciders are engaged in heated battle with the enemies, try to show that they are grossly outnumbered. Billy's plane has exploded.

SFX BOOM!




Page 4

The Wing gets slaughtered in moments. Horrified, Amos orders Allie to hook the tow line then climb up to his plane.

01 Profile. Amos is center panel, looking behind him at a one of his men dying in an explosion. Back panel another of the planes is being destroyed.

Amos NO!

02 Amos has a tear in his eye, and looks stunned by the sudden death of his friends. In the distance the enemy has turned away.

03 POV from the radio on the dashboard looking up at Amos. Amos is still distraught.

Radio LIEUTENANT! COMMAND IS CALLING IT OFF!

Radio ABORT! REPEAT, ABORT THE MISSION! THE WAR IS OVER.

04 Outside the plane. Amos has made a decision and looks determined. In the distance the Base Ship still looms.

Radio WE'VE SURRENDERED!

05 Amos leans over so that we can see the Bomber flying below his plane.

Amos OY! MR. ALLIE!

Amos I'M SENDING DOWN MY TOW LINE! ARM EVERYTHING, THEN GET YOURSELF UP HERE!


Page 5

01 Allie has hooked up the tow line and is climbing up Both Amos's plane and the Bomber are turning back towards the Base Ship.

Amos IF WE'RE GOING TO DIE, WE'RE GOING TO DIE AS EQUALS MR. ALLIE...

02 Wide panel of Amos, with Allie holding on to the top of his plane, flying through a mass of enemy planes and evading fire. They are towing the Bomber as they do this.

Amos ...AND WE'RE TAKING AS MANY OF THOSE BASTARDS WITH US AS WE CAN!

03 Close up on Allie, hanging onto the plane, near the tow hook.

Amos LET IT GO!

04 Large profile of Amos's plane flying high above the Diamond Base Ship. They have let the Bomber go, and it's clear that it's going to crash into the base ship. Below the ship is the title “The Suiciders”

Amos I SHOULD HAVE HAD THAT DRINK WITH THEM.

Amos – What is the weight of air per cubic foot?


Molly – 76.36 pounds.


Amos – Lift of Hydrogen?


Molly – 5.31

  • Watching: Wonders of the Universe
  • Playing: Skyrim (when it comes out)
  • Eating: Food
  • Drinking: Liquids

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BabaKinkin Featured By Owner May 17, 2016
ta for the watch!
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Trepolo Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the watch ^-^I am a dummy! 
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Malleni-Stock Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:+fav: Thank you very much! :pat:
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Null-Entity Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for faving ^^
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Null-Entity Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
And the watch :dance:
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JollyStock Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thx for the fav. :)
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Malleni-Stock Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
THANKS A LOT FOR YOUR SUPPORT! :heart:
IT IS MUCH APPRECIATED :pat:

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brighteyesgal Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the favorite!!! :)
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CarlShinyama Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey Cresc, how goes your writing?
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cresc Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry about the late response. Been writing a short script based on the theme "epic fail".

The hero keeps having embarrassing photographs taken of her. she eventually decides to take control of the situation by agreeing to pose for publicity on her own terms.
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